tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7098979765557232172.post5784927072039086986..comments2015-12-02T11:57:50.860-08:00Comments on Ardan's blog: Lorraine Frances-Reeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12636516800493053377noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7098979765557232172.post-66382268192937449882014-08-11T01:22:00.072-07:002014-08-11T01:22:00.072-07:00You made a good summary of the plot Ardan. The qu...You made a good summary of the plot Ardan. The quote you've written directly from the book needs to be in speech marks. I can see now why its called the "Night of the Giant Everything." Lorraine Frances-Reeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12636516800493053377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7098979765557232172.post-48873221768099954262014-08-07T23:25:20.450-07:002014-08-07T23:25:20.450-07:00Hey Ardan, another great blog post son! The only t...Hey Ardan, another great blog post son! The only thing I think you might need to do is break your writing into paragraphs to introduce breaks between ideas? You've got a great writing style that is really enjoyable to read. Well done mate! Can't wait to read more! Dad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com